MAK SID from EBKT Rwy 24 : fly with an adequate WCA flying QDM 040 on a heading 040 with a crosswind will not keep you on the QDM. Otherwise good.
VOR Holding over KOK: teardrop entry; stay focused, turning the wrong way ruins your holding.
VOR holding: parallel entry: take into account the wind in order to fly at least half-deflected CSI on the OB leg of the entry.  Second attempt : good.
Preparation and setup of Lctr Appr O8: good